I have one small thing to point out. In the article it's said that he learned about the Battle of Tallarn and as a result he developed a lifelong hatred of Chaos. Aside from the fact that the Battle of Tallarn was during the Horus Heresy, a time of which surviving records are scarce, the Imperium actively suppresses any knowledge about Chaos, so he would not have learned about them. It would probably more be realistic to say he developed a hatred for traitor or heretics. I am your master! At your service. (talk) 15:49, August 12, 2015 (UTC)
Which technically makes this article NCF. --Big Guy (talk) 15:50, August 12, 2015 (UTC)
I have one small thing to point out. In the article it's said that he learned about the Battle of Tallarn and as a result he developed a lifelong hatred of Chaos. Aside from the fact that the Battle of Tallarn was during the Horus Heresy, a time of which surviving records are scarce, the Imperium actively suppresses any knowledge about Chaos, so he would not have learned about them. It would probably more be realistic to say he developed a hatred for traitor or heretics. I am your master! At your service. (talk) 15:51, August 12, 2015 (UTC)
I will fix it- say he learned about the battle from local folklore and family history. Doesn't have the whole truth but enough of it to hate the death and destruction that goes along with Heresy. better? either of you guys have a planet he could have died on?--BrowncoatMando (talk) 00:52, August 13, 2015 (UTC)